Going to give you proper reviews from now but lazy to type it in a paragraph so
+Intro - good mood and fitting timbres used
+Contrasts between sections instrumentally and dynamics wise
+The high, rapidly arpeggiated? sound
*Chordal instrument which enters 0:37 and 2:13 a bit loud, almost drowns out melody in 2nd chorus
*Drums could be more varied between sections
*Choruses could be more varied?
*Lead instrument in non-chorus sections seems a bit bland timbre wise and could have less harsh attack; it's less noticeable in the verse but becomes more apparent in pre chorus and especially in bridge
*Ending was very abrupt for me, almost as if unfinished/almost worked when looped back to the start (because i was listening on loop for a while)
Thanks for the review, I'll definitely take everything on board!
Good but repetitive
I liked the overall feel of the music however I think it gets repetitive after a while even though the percussion and bass parts have variety. Still, this is just the intro, so I think theres more to expect out of this song!
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